Poem #3 For Lack Of A Better Title

Blind men who seek

Harmony and Truth among Friends,

-His Light, to Guide them

so they need not see

To be Wise.

 

Yet men who see and reap-

Discord and Lies among Friends,

-No Light to Guide their Paths

so thus must be Blind

To be Fools.

***

I would like to work on the punctuation a bit more(I’m not sure about the dashes) to get the desired effect but for now I hope that it is good enough. Maybe if I look at it tomorrow I will see that there is nothing wrong with the puctuation. And the word reap just doesn’t feel like the necessary word there.

Still annoyed with viruses,

~Tally

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